Friday, 15 June 2012

My poem ~ Kuch dur aur tum saath chalte


Completed recording my second poem ….. Wrote it In July 2011 …. But decided to record the same and create a video few weeks ago …. 

My first poem was love@facebook … this was kept under “Fun” category …. 

But this poem of a “Negative Shade” category …. Which I prefer writing …. 

Comments would be highly encouraging :)

Enjoy ladies and gentlemen \m/


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8 comments:

  1. Dhruv Saraswat15 June 2012 at 20:42

    very nicely synchronized with the images...
    nice morals,
    my favorite part 2:20-2:50...

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  2. Unknown15 June 2012 at 21:18

    awesome poem Bhavik.... very nicely written... i didn't know that you are a great poet also... vo lamha tham hi jata agar.. tum girte humari agosh me aur kabhi na sambhalte.. best part..

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    1. Sharma15 June 2012 at 22:10

      Thanks Mukta ... This particular line is the best even for me ....

      aur waise abhi to bahut kuch hai hamare baare mein jo aap nahi jante :D

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  3. Unknown15 June 2012 at 21:38

    i read during childhood, that action speak louder than words, but your poem and words rather i would call them ('ALFAAZ') made me think the other way round.
    I liked the way you brought out your deep thoughts arranged them in beautiful manner.

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    1. Sharma15 June 2012 at 22:11

      Thanks bhai Darvesh ... thanks a ton for the comment ... this have motivated a lot yaara :)

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    2. Aman Bhardwaj17 June 2012 at 10:12

      wah wah sharma sahab

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    3. Sharma17 June 2012 at 17:06

      Thanks bhai Aman ... :)

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